By Scott Bailey © 2016
The pie chart tells all
How our future is planned out
While dreams turn to dust
In response to RonovanWrites #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt #Challenge #107 Pie&Dust
#Ronovan Writes Haiku Challenge
The pie chart tells all
How our future is planned out
While dreams turn to dust
In response to RonovanWrites #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt #Challenge #107 Pie&Dust
#Ronovan Writes Haiku Challenge
very deep haiku well done
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Reblogged this on thehouseofbailey.
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Pie chart – brilliant!
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You have an interesting way with words. Are we all a statistic in the end? Food for thought engaging the philosopher in me. The last line brought sadness to my heart. I saw the reality of your haiku on the streets of Ottawa this past week-end.
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Thank you. But sorry I brought sadness. I must write something more positive soon.
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Sadness is a good thing. The world revolves around opposites. One needs to experience sadness to appreciate happiness. No, don’t change your style of writing. 🙂
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Good use of the prompt!
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Thank you
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